Chains
These chains dig into my skin,
Drawing blood that just pours from my viens
no one can't stop the bleeding
And my life is slipping out of control
Heart beat slows
Eyes grow tired
I just wanna sleep, I just wanna rest
But I do fear, yes, I do fear
That if I do sleep
I will never awaken
My breathe growing shallow
My eyes have closed already
I'm becoming numb and it doesn't seem that I need to breathe
I take in a deep breathe
And it's my last.
Drawing blood that just pours from my viens
no one can't stop the bleeding
And my life is slipping out of control
Heart beat slows
Eyes grow tired
I just wanna sleep, I just wanna rest
But I do fear, yes, I do fear
That if I do sleep
I will never awaken
My breathe growing shallow
My eyes have closed already
I'm becoming numb and it doesn't seem that I need to breathe
I take in a deep breathe
And it's my last.
12 Comments
wow. thats deep.
That's really good! How did you think of it? I hope you didn't think of it because of experience because that would be horrible!
Poems for me are easy to write. My mind and heart provide the words whilst my hand writes them down. This is just another something from my mind n
Wow! wish I was good at making poems!
Good poem! I wish i could write poems that easily.....its hard for me to write poems and stuff
Amazing as usual! You have inspired me to continue to write poetry :)
this is amazing! my poems suck...
Wonderful poem! I really like this one.
I thought it said "Chans". I was expecting a poem about all the chans and stuff.
deep
amazing, sad, deep. Is there a poem you can't do well!
wow, kinda scary but at the same time interesting. nice :)